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In the chaos of the Scorned Barons' escape from the Prison of Elders, Lau'urc and the Broken Legion would also escape by commandeering several Harvesters that had been captured by the [[Awoken]]. They eventually took refuge in a Carrier that had crashed on the asteroid 87 Sylvia during the [[Red War]]. Before long, a skirmish broke out between Gu'uam and Lau'urc's forces over control of the group. Lau'urc and her loyalists would ultimately win, killing two of Gu'uam's commanders and forcing him to flee. Lau'urc went on to take full control of the Broken Legion's remnants, dubbing herself their new Primus, and evict the remainders of Gu'uam’s Loyalists while recruiting those willing to serve her. Among them was Thua'urn, who had sided with Lau'urc and warned her of the planned attack before their escape.

Not much is known about what the Broken Legion did between their rebirth and the arrival of the [[Pyramid]] Ships. They mainly looted Red Legion outposts in and around the Reef to bolster their forces and managed to recruit some members of the Red Legion, and other Cabal factions, to their side. These included Dhozoz, the Silent Brawn, who was rescued from the destruction of the asteroid Eunnomia after a battle with Red Legion remnants. They would also begin to work alongside the Spider's Crime Syndicate, offering their services in exchange for weapons and munitions.

===Rise of the Raiders===

By the ~~time of~~ the [[Clash of the Chosen]], ~~the Broken Legion transformed into the Dune Raiders but continued as usual with looting~~ and ~~pillaging~~ the Battlegrounds of [[Caiatl]]'s army ~~to bolster their own forces~~. One splinter of Caiatl's army, led by a Flayer named Vraltras, who had abandoned the Empress for losing the final [[Rite of Proving]] to the [[Guardian]]s would seek out the Dune Raiders to join them, bringing supplies, weapons and ships with them.

In the years that followed, Lau'urc would lead her crew, now calling themselves the Dune Raiders, in looting [[Red Legion]] outposts in and around the Reef to bolster their forces, as well as recruiting deserters and mercenaries from the Red Legion and other Cabal factions like Calus' [[Loyalists]] to their side, such as Dhozoz, the Silent Brawn. They would also begin to work alongside the Spider's Crime Syndicate, offering their services in exchange for weapons and munitions. During the [[Clash of the Chosen]], they would loot and pillage the Battlegrounds of [[Caiatl]]'s army. One splinter of Caiatl's army, led by a Flayer named Vraltras, who had abandoned the Empress for losing the final [[Rite of Proving]] to the [[Guardian]]s would seek out the Dune Raiders to join them, bringing supplies, weapons and ships with them.

With the supplies accumulated since their escape, Lau'urc's next order would be to turn the asteroid Sylvia into their new base and repair the Carrier, ~~which was~~ later dubbed the Thanatos Transfuga. With the asteroid's surface clear, they hallowed it out and converted it into Firebase Cerberus with enough room within to store Goliath Tanks and all of their ~~plunder~~. They also converted its moons of Remus and Romulus into orbital gun emplacements for added defence.

With the supplies accumulated since their escape, Lau'urc's next order would be to turn the asteroid Sylvia into their new base and repair the Carrier, later dubbed the Thanatos Transfuga. With the asteroid's surface clear, they hallowed it out and converted it into Firebase Cerberus with enough room within to store Goliath Tanks and all of their loot. They also converted its moons of Remus and Romulus into orbital gun emplacements for added defence.

Later on, as [[the Coalition]] began to form, Lau'urc would express her support to the Empress in the upcoming war against the [[The Witness|Voice in the Darkness]] and its forces. While most of her crew reacted with positivity to this, some like Vraltras and Shumuv were more negative, with the latter even defecting to Emperor Calus.

However, despite stealing from her Battlegrounds, Lau'urc began to find sympathy in Caiatl's cause, especially after learning what had happened to [[Torobatl]]. Later on, as [[the Coalition]] began to form, Lau'urc would express her support to the Empress in the upcoming war against the [[The Witness|Voice in the Darkness]] and its forces. While most of her crew reacted with positivity to this, some like Vraltras and Shumuv were more negative, with the latter even defecting to Emperor Calus.

===Discovery on Titania===

When the Leviathan was [[Severing of the Nightmares|haunted]] by [[Nightmare]]s, Lau'urc would move her control beyond the Reef and so moved to claim the Uransian Moon of Titania. There, the Dune Raiders constructed a mighty Fleetbase and deployed many giant mining drills to gather resources. During construction, Dune Raider crews found a derelict Pramid buried deep under the surface of the moon. Lau'urc and the Dune Raiders would begin plundering the vessel of whatever tech, weapons, trinkets and relics they could find, intent on using them against the Witness and its servants, as well as to hopefully reclaim their home.

In the aftermath of the Witness' death in [[The Traveler]]'s [[Pale Heart]], the Dune Raiders would begin plundering from the now scattered and leaderless [[Shadow Legion]] and even manage to convince many of those deserters that had joined Calus to join them.

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 In the chaos of the Scorned Barons' escape from the Prison of Elders, Lau'urc and the Broken Legion would also escape by commandeering several Harvesters that had been captured by the [[Awoken]]. They eventually took refuge in a Carrier that had crashed on the asteroid 87 Sylvia during the [[Red War]]. Before long, a skirmish broke out between Gu'uam and Lau'urc's forces over control of the group. Lau'urc and her loyalists would ultimately win, killing two of Gu'uam's commanders and forcing him to flee. Lau'urc went on to take full control of the Broken Legion's remnants, dubbing herself their new Primus, and evict the remainders of Gu'uam’s Loyalists while recruiting those willing to serve her. Among them was Thua'urn, who had sided with Lau'urc and warned her of the planned attack before their escape.
-Not much is known about what the Broken Legion did between their rebirth and the arrival of the [[Pyramid]] Ships. They mainly looted Red Legion outposts in and around the Reef to bolster their forces and managed to recruit some members of the Red Legion, and other Cabal factions, to their side. These included Dhozoz, the Silent Brawn, who was rescued from the destruction of the asteroid Eunnomia after a battle with Red Legion remnants. They would also begin to work alongside the Spider's Crime Syndicate, offering their services in exchange for weapons and munitions.
 ===Rise of the Raiders===
-By the time of the [[Clash of the Chosen]], the Broken Legion transformed into the Dune Raiders but continued as usual with looting and pillaging the Battlegrounds of [[Caiatl]]'s army to bolster their own forces. One splinter of Caiatl's army, led by a Flayer named Vraltras, who had abandoned the Empress for losing the final [[Rite of Proving]] to the [[Guardian]]s would seek out the Dune Raiders to join them, bringing supplies, weapons and ships with them.
+In the years that followed, Lau'urc would lead her crew, now calling themselves the Dune Raiders, in looting [[Red Legion]] outposts in and around the Reef to bolster their forces, as well as recruiting deserters and mercenaries from the Red Legion and other Cabal factions like Calus' [[Loyalists]] to their side, such as Dhozoz, the Silent Brawn. They would also begin to work alongside the Spider's Crime Syndicate, offering their services in exchange for weapons and munitions. During the [[Clash of the Chosen]], they would loot and pillage the Battlegrounds of [[Caiatl]]'s army. One splinter of Caiatl's army, led by a Flayer named Vraltras, who had abandoned the Empress for losing the final [[Rite of Proving]] to the [[Guardian]]s would seek out the Dune Raiders to join them, bringing supplies, weapons and ships with them.
-With the supplies accumulated since their escape, Lau'urc's next order would be to turn the asteroid Sylvia into their new base and repair the Carrier, which was later dubbed the Thanatos Transfuga. With the asteroid's surface clear, they hallowed it out and converted it into Firebase Cerberus with enough room within to store Goliath Tanks and all of their plunder. They also converted its moons of Remus and Romulus into orbital gun emplacements for added defence.
+With the supplies accumulated since their escape, Lau'urc's next order would be to turn the asteroid Sylvia into their new base and repair the Carrier, later dubbed the Thanatos Transfuga. With the asteroid's surface clear, they hallowed it out and converted it into Firebase Cerberus with enough room within to store Goliath Tanks and all of their loot. They also converted its moons of Remus and Romulus into orbital gun emplacements for added defence.
-Later on, as [[the Coalition]] began to form, Lau'urc would express her support to the Empress in the upcoming war against the [[The Witness|Voice in the Darkness]] and its forces. While most of her crew reacted with positivity to this, some like Vraltras and Shumuv were more negative, with the latter even defecting to Emperor Calus.
+However, despite stealing from her Battlegrounds, Lau'urc began to find sympathy in Caiatl's cause, especially after learning what had happened to [[Torobatl]]. Later on, as [[the Coalition]] began to form, Lau'urc would express her support to the Empress in the upcoming war against the [[The Witness|Voice in the Darkness]] and its forces. While most of her crew reacted with positivity to this, some like Vraltras and Shumuv were more negative, with the latter even defecting to Emperor Calus.
 ===Discovery on Titania===
 When the Leviathan was [[Severing of the Nightmares|haunted]] by [[Nightmare]]s, Lau'urc would move her control beyond the Reef and so moved to claim the Uransian Moon of Titania. There, the Dune Raiders constructed a mighty Fleetbase and deployed many giant mining drills to gather resources. During construction, Dune Raider crews found a derelict Pramid buried deep under the surface of the moon. Lau'urc and the Dune Raiders would begin plundering the vessel of whatever tech, weapons, trinkets and relics they could find, intent on using them against the Witness and its servants, as well as to hopefully reclaim their home.
+In the aftermath of the Witness' death in [[The Traveler]]'s [[Pale Heart]], the Dune Raiders would begin plundering from the now scattered and leaderless [[Shadow Legion]] and even manage to convince many of those deserters that had joined Calus to join them.
 ==Structure==

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