User talk:Empathy Kill: Difference between revisions

Latest revision as of 13:14, November 11, 2016

Manual of Style: This page outlines the format of all articles on Destinypedia.
Projects: Get involved by helping with one of Destinypedia's ongoing projects.
Stubs: These smaller pages could use some attention. Please add what you can!
Need help?: Check the tutorials listed here for more help. Or, visit our Discord server for live chat support!
Admin team: Meet the team in charge of maintaining the wiki!

We wish you the best of luck, and hope you have fun editing the wiki!

Removal of edit[edit]

From what I can tell, your edit was removed because it contained second-person writing, which isn't up to our standards. If you would like to re-add the edit and rewrite it to those standards, it will be allowed to stay. We welcome all contributions.--Spartacus ^{Talk • Contribs} 12:08, 11 November 2016 (EST)

Suggestions[edit]

Hey there. I noticed you've added some content to the Archon's Forge that could use a little tweaking and keep most of it in there. As Spartacus has said, your original contributions did not live up to our standards. I've taken the liberty to add your edits to the Destinypedia:Sandbox along with how I or another user here would have written it. If you need any more advice, or help, myself, Arcmind, or Spartacus will be happy to help. --Dante the Ghost (talk) 13:14, 11 November 2016 (EST)

@@ Line 2: / Line 2: @@
 == Removal of edit ==
+From what I can tell, your edit was removed because it contained [[Destinypedia:Manual_of_Style#Do_not_use_conversational_style|second-person writing]], which isn't up to our standards. If you would like to re-add the edit and rewrite it to those standards, it will be allowed to stay. We welcome all contributions.--{{User:Spartacus/Sig}} 12:08, 11 November 2016 (EST)
-From what I can tell, your edit was removed because it contained [[Destinypedia:Manual_of_Style#Do_not_use_conversational_style|second-person writing]], which isn't up to our standards. If you would like to re-add the edit and rewrite it to those standards, it will be allowed to stay. We welcome all contributions.--{{User:Spartacus/Sig}} 12:08, 11 November 2016 (EST)
+== Suggestions ==
+Hey there. I noticed you've added some content to the Archon's Forge that could use a little tweaking and keep most of it in there. As Spartacus has said, your original contributions did not live up to our standards. I've taken the liberty to add your edits to the [[Destinypedia:Sandbox]] along with how I or another user here would have written it. If you need any more advice, or help, myself, [[User:Arcmind|Arcmind]], or [[User:Spartacus|Spartacus]] will be happy to help. --[[User:Dante the Ghost|Dante the Ghost]] ([[User talk:Dante the Ghost|talk]]) 13:14, 11 November 2016 (EST)