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 {{quote|We fought to keep our beautiful creation safe. And now this beast has come, claiming to be King. Mara Sov bows to no one.|Mara Sov}}
 The '''Battle of Saturn''' was the first conflict of [[the Taken War]], the invasion of the [[Solar System]] by [[Oryx, the Taken King]].
 ==Prelude==
-Before the battle took place [[Eris Morn]] came to [[Mara Sov|The Queen]] to warn her of Oryx's impending threat and in retaliation, the Queen prepared her troops and once Oryx reached [[Saturn]], the Queen and her army arrived to challenge Oryx's armada.
+Before the battle took place, [[Eris Morn]] warned [[Mara Sov|The Queen]] of Oryx's impending threat and in response, the Queen and her forces set their ships on a course for [[Saturn]] to challenge Oryx's armada.
 ==The Battle==