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*'''Mara Sov''': The Awoken are my family now. And I am their Queen. | *'''Mara Sov''': The Awoken are my family now. And I am their Queen. | ||
''An enormous battle begins, as the Hive and the Awoken fight amongst the rings of Saturn. The Galliots | ''An enormous battle begins, as the Hive and the Awoken fight amongst the rings of Saturn. The Galliots begin firing at the Hive warships, causing massive damage to their armored bodies. Several supporting Hive [[Tombship]]s are destroyed whilst the warships return fire. The camera tilts and pans about as the Awoken play havoc among the Hive. Suddenly, Uldren notices the Dreadnaught in the center, and prepares to fire onto it with two others. The missiles launched fail to even scratch the hull. Uldren looks back in dismay as his wing retreats.'' | ||
*'''Mara Sov''': We fought to keep our beautiful creation safe. | *'''Mara Sov''': We fought to keep our beautiful creation safe. | ||
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''As the four of them stand in position Mara's eyes begin to glow a bright blue, and they flicker until she closes them. Several blue-white wisps of bright energy appear between the Techeuns' outstretched hands, while outside a much larger line of energy forms outside the Queen's ship in parallel with her own outstretched hands.'' | ''As the four of them stand in position Mara's eyes begin to glow a bright blue, and they flicker until she closes them. Several blue-white wisps of bright energy appear between the Techeuns' outstretched hands, while outside a much larger line of energy forms outside the Queen's ship in parallel with her own outstretched hands.'' | ||
''Seven spheres of brilliant blue light coalesce out of the line as a result of the Coven's channeling energy to the Queen; the line of energy dissipates and the [[Harbinger]]s rush forward. They arc up into the asteroid ring and begin dragging with them hundreds of rocks ranging from dust mites to Tombship-sized boulders, along with | ''Seven spheres of brilliant blue light coalesce out of the line as a result of the Coven's channeling energy to the Queen; the line of energy dissipates and the [[Harbinger]]s rush forward. They arc up into the asteroid ring and begin dragging with them hundreds of rocks ranging from dust mites to Tombship-sized boulders, along with a few Tombships themselves, pulling them inexorably to the Dreadnaught.'' | ||
''Mara Sov collapses from overexertion and the Witches catch her. The Harbingers continue their assault, easily tearing through multiple Hive ships on the way to their true target: the Dreadnaught. Upon slamming into the sides of the flagship, however, the Dreadnaught [[Ascendant Realm|remains completely undamaged]] | ''Mara Sov collapses from overexertion and the Witches catch her. The Harbingers continue their assault, easily tearing through multiple Hive ships on the way to their true target: the Dreadnaught. Upon slamming into the sides of the flagship, however, the Dreadnaught [[Ascendant Realm|remains completely undamaged]]. The camera fades away as Hive ships drift towards the Dreadnaught.'' | ||
''The camera cuts to the Queen, now revived, who steps forward to see what has happened, as if in disbelief; her eyes slowly | ''The camera cuts to the Queen, now revived, who steps forward to see what has happened, as if in disbelief; her eyes slowly lose their glow. The camera cuts to the side of the Dreadnaught, the massive parabolic dish of the ship's cannon looming in the midground.'' | ||
*'''Mara Sov''': You and I know how this ends. | *'''Mara Sov''': You and I know how this ends. |