Editing Forum:The Reveal

When The Chorus’s son was born many questioned what to name him. The Chorus thought long and hard. He decided that he shall be named The Hunt, as he will hunt for peace and prosperity. The Hunt had many teachers when he was young, his favorite was The Wisdom, a kind and smart tutor. The Wisdom told of many different species such as the Erikan, a dangerous serpent who plagued the air of another planet. The Wisdom also secretly taught The Hunt of his fathers flaws. His father was malicious towards thoughts who wronged his species but was lenient on punishments of those who had wronged other species. The Hunt took to dueling, enjoying the sport and becoming an expert at it. He was an excellent swordsman. His main friends were The Elite, The Harvest, The Plan, The Secret, The Quick. They formed a crew, calling themselves The Duelists. The Chorus’ rule kept getting worse, The Hunt witnessed him go from a good ruler, to a tyrant. He needed to end it. He challenged his own father a duel to the death. His father never cared much about The Hunt and laughed at him as he declined. However The Hunt knew he needed to die. He impaled his father on his blade, ending the tyrant.