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{{Quote|I am the Chisel Unbreakable, the Sword Insurmountable, the Black Hammer, Arbiter of the Witness, I am Shin'ra, God of Forge!}}
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{{Quote|I am the Chisel Unbreakable, the Sword Insurmountable, the Black Hammer, Arbiter of the Witness, I am Shin'ra, God of Forge!}}


'''Shin'ra, the Sorrow Maker''' is an [[Ascendant Hive|Ascendant]] [[Hive]], progenitor of the [[Darkblade]]s and founder of the element known as [[Forum:Corruption (element)|Corruption]]. Acting as the Hive's weapons master, he commands a [[Forum:Weavers of Sorrow|Hive Brood]] devoted to his craft of the [[Weapons of Sorrow]]. He also possesses untold power over the [[Darkness]] and the [[Black Fleet]] through the creation of [[Forum:Corruption (element)|Corruption]]. He acts as a reoccurring antagonist in ''[[Destiny 2]]'' and is most notable for his major roles in ''[[Forum:Season of Sorrow|Season of Sorrow]]'', ''[[Season of the Wish]]'', ''[[Into the Light]]'' and ''[[Forum:Episode: Dread|Episode: Dread]]'', along with minor roles in ''[[Season of the Deep]]'' and ''[[Season of the Witch]]''.  
'''Shin'ra, the Sorrow Maker''' is an [[Ascendant Hive|Ascendant]] [[Hive]], progenitor of the [[Darkblade]]s and founder of the element known as [[Forum:Corruption (element)|Corruption]]. Acting as the Hive's weapons master, he commands a [[Forum:Weavers of Sorrow|Hive Brood]] devoted to his craft of the [[Weapons of Sorrow]]. He also possesses untold power over the [[Darkness]] and the [[Black Fleet]] through the creation of [[Forum:Corruption (element)|Corruption]]. He acts as a reoccurring antagonist in ''[[Destiny 2]]'' and is most notable for his major roles in ''[[Forum:Season of Sorrow|Season of Sorrow]]'', ''[[Season of the Wish]]'', ''[[Into the Light]]'' and ''[[Forum:Episode: Dread|Episode: Dread]]'', along with minor roles in ''[[Season of the Deep]]'' and ''[[Season of the Witch]]''.  
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===Greater Truth===
===Greater Truth===
====Understanding the Deep====
====Understanding the Deep====
{{quote|There was a voice in the Deep. One without form as it took that of mine. The Witness. A chorus of the slain made manifest|Shin'ra detailing his first encounter with the Witness.}}
{{quote|There was a voice in the Deep. A one without form as it took that of mine. The Witness. A chorus of the slain made manifest|Shin'ra detailing his first encounter with the Witness.}}


Shin'ra would be present in the Hive's war against the [[Harmony]], destroying their many vessels and successfully conquering their Wishful Bishops compared to Xivu Arath who struggled against them. When Oryx toppled the [[Gift Mast]] and offered its pieces to his broods, Shin'ra would take one of these fragments for study. He would use the fragment as a basis for what would later be known as the '''[[Weapons of Sorrow]]''', while the shard itself would be known as the ''Lucent Armament'', the basis for the Weapons of Sorrow's antithesis, the ''Weapons of Hope''.
Shin'ra would be present in the Hive's war against the [[Harmony]], destroying their many vessels and successfully conquering their Wishful Bishops compared to Xivu Arath who struggled against them. When Oryx toppled the [[Gift Mast]] and offered its pieces to his broods, Shin'ra would take one of these fragments for study. He would use the fragment as a basis for what would later be known as the '''[[Weapons of Sorrow]]''', while the shard itself would be known as the ''Lucent Armament'', the basis for the Weapons of Sorrow's antithesis, the ''Weapons of Hope''.
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His actions would create a death cult under the command of his vassal, [[Forum:Acaeleon, Vassal to Shin'ra|Acaeleon]]. This death cult would begin sacrifices as a means to return the Traveler back to the Nadheal, however this was only a clever rouse by Shin'ra to tithe their deaths to him instead. This death cult would persist through several years as the God of Forge slowly began to reveal himself to Acaeleon, promising to offer a greater power than the Traveler ever could.  
His actions would create a death cult under the command of his vassal, [[Forum:Acaeleon, Vassal to Shin'ra|Acaeleon]]. This death cult would begin sacrifices as a means to return the Traveler back to the Nadheal, however this was only a clever rouse by Shin'ra to tithe their deaths to him instead. This death cult would persist through several years as the God of Forge slowly began to reveal himself to Acaeleon, promising to offer a greater power than the Traveler ever could.  


Fully under the thrall of the Hive God, Acaeleon would instigate a galactic scale civil war in the Nadheal home system. Their various colonies burned and destroyed and their capital in ruins with all that remained of their civilization forced to live on large cruisers for survival. Even under the control of Shin'ra, Acaeleon doubted his own actions and the destruction of his people. His doubt invoked Shin'ra to appear before him, declaring that he was unworthy of the power he sought to gift. He would then stab the weakened Nadheal with his blackened blade, and the power of the Hive corruption spread throughout his body, leaving it as a shriveling corpse. Shin'ra would have his followers destroy any that remained of the Nadheal people, including their home world.
Fully under the thrall of the Hive God, Acaeleon would instigate a galactic scale civil war in the Nadheal home system. Their various colonies burned and destroyed and their capital in ruins with all that remained of their civilization forced to live on large cruisers for survival. Even under the control of Shin'ra, Acaeleon doubted his own actions and the destruction of his people. His doubt invoked Shin'ra to appear before him, declaring that he was unworthy of the power he sought to gift. He would then stab the weakened Nadheal with his blackened blade, and the power of the Hige corruption spread throughout his body, leaving it as a shriveling corpse. Shin'ra would have his followers destroy any that remained of the Nadheal people, including their home world.


====Destruction of the Ussatan====
====Destruction of the Ussatan====
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====Season of Sorrow====
====Season of Sorrow====
Shin'ra would openly reveal himself following the death of the [[High Celebrant of Xivu Arath]] and send his High Conjurer, [[Forum:An Irvask, High Conjurer|An Irvask]] to consolidate the [[Wrathborn]] in the [[European Dead Zone]] and use them as tribute, while he himself met the [[Hidden Swarm]] on the [[Moon]] to consolidate their forces into the Weavers of Sorrow. The Guardians would learn of An Irvask's plans on Earth, destroy a [[Forum:Wrathborn Walker|Wrathborn Walker]], and eventually finding the High Conjurer in the [[Scavenger's Den]] and killing them.  
Shin'ra would openly reveal himself following the death of the [[High Celebrant of Xivu Arath]] and send his High Conjurer, [[Forum:An Irvask, High Conjurer|An Irvask]] to consolidate the [[Wrathborn]] in the [[European Dead Zone]] and use them as tribute, while he himself met the [[Hidden Swarm]] on the [[Moon]] to consolidate their forces into the Weavers of Sorrow. The Guardians would learn of An Irvask's plans on Earth, even destroying a [[Forum:Wrathborn Walker|Wrathborn Walker]], eventually finding the High Conjurer in the [[Scavenger's Den]] and killing them.  


The Guardians would then locate Shin'ra's congregation on Luna and attempt to put a stop to it. The God of Forge would hold them off by sending some of his elite Hive while he continued to poison the minds of the Hidden Swarm, eventually having to face the Guardians head on. Instead of fighting them, he would taunt the Guardians, declaring that his conquest was inevitable and fleeing from the scene after summoning forth his [[Forum:Sorrow's Eye, Seeker for Shin'ra|Seeker]].
The Guardians would learn of Shin'ra's congregation on Luna and attempt to put a stop to it. The God of Forge would hold them off by sending some of his elite Hive while he continued to poison the minds of the Hidden Swarm, eventually having to face the Guardians head on. Instead of fighting them, he would taunt the Guardians, declaring that his conquest was inevitable and fleeing from the scene after summoning forth his [[Forum:Sorrow's Eye, Seeker for Shin'ra|Seeker]].


Even though the Guardians would learn of his plans to consolidate the Sol System Hive, he would continue on with his greater plans at large by sending three members of the Court of Sorrow, [[Forum:Ir Abzûl, the Cryptkeeper|Ir Abzûl, the Cryptkeeper]], [[Forum:Kramûc, the Huntsman|Kramûc, the Huntsman]], and [[Forum:Davaj, the Blademaster|Davaj, the Blademaster]] to the European Dead Zone, the [[Tangled Shore]] and the Moon respectively to establish footholds for the Weavers. Afterwards, he would learn of the Guardian's infiltration of the Nephilim and their acquisition of Corruption as their new Darkness element. He would attempt to stop them by sending forth some of his more powerful champions, including skilled users of Corruption. They would eventually fall to the Guardians, angering Shin'ra greatly and began to pull much of his resources to reinforce his commanders for the battles to come.
Even though the Guardians would learn of his plans to consolidate the Sol System Hive, he would continue on with his greater plans at large by sending three members of the Court of Sorrow, [[Forum:Ir Abzûl, the Cryptkeeper|Ir Abzûl, the Cryptkeeper]], [[Forum:Kramûc, the Huntsman|Kramûc, the Huntsman]], and [[Forum:Davaj, the Blademaster|Davaj, the Blademaster]] to the European Dead Zone, the [[Tangled Shore]] and the Moon respectively to establish footholds for the Weavers. Afterwards, he would learn of the Guardian's infiltration of the Nephilim and their acquisition of Corruption as their new Darkness element. He would attempt to stop them by sending forth some of his more powerful champions, including skilled users of Corruption. They would eventually fall to the Guardians, angering Shin'ra greatly and began to pull much of his resources to reinforce his commanders for the battles to come.


After Ir Abzûl, Kramûc and Davaj fell to the Guardians, Shin'ra took a last ditch effort decision to command Jirâth to take command of the Weaver's Hive and Taken forces to begin a full on assault on inner Sol. The Guardians would infiltrate the Nephilim to defeat Jirgâth before this plan would come to fruition. There they would meet Shin'ra once again, empowering the Warpriest with more of his power to end the Lightbearer threat. Jirgâth would fail to defeat the Guardians, becoming another victim to their slaughter, forcing Shin'ra to continue his consolidation within his citadel.
After Ir Abzûl, Kramûc and Davaj fell to the Guardians, Shin'ra took a last ditch effort decision to command Jirâth to take command of the Weaver's Hive and Taken forces to begin a full on assault on inner Sol. The Guardians would infiltrate the Nephilim to defeat Jirgâth before this plan would come to fruition. There they would meet Shin'ra once again, empowering the Warpriest with more of his power to end the Lightbearer threat. Jirgâth would fail to defeat the Guardians, becoming another victim to their slaughter, forcing Shin'ra to continue his consolidation within his citadel.  


====Fall of the Maker====
====Fall of the Maker====
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While investigating the depths of the [[New Pacific Arcology]], the Celebrants would discover something of great importance, something that Shin'ra must see for himself. Reaching the [[Ghosts of the Deep (location)|dark hovel]] near the depths of Titan, he would discover the corpse of Oryx, the Taken King, still growing but unconscious. He would take this discovery to Xivu Arath, who was outraged at the recent revelation, and sought to take his corpse to be properly buried, only for the forces of the Lucent Brood to crash [[Wreckage|one]] of their warships near Oryx's corpse and try to resurrect him with Necromancy and Light of a [[Ghost]] and the Guardians successfully taking Oryx's remains to be locked up within one of the Tower's vaults.
While investigating the depths of the [[New Pacific Arcology]], the Celebrants would discover something of great importance, something that Shin'ra must see for himself. Reaching the [[Ghosts of the Deep (location)|dark hovel]] near the depths of Titan, he would discover the corpse of Oryx, the Taken King, still growing but unconscious. He would take this discovery to Xivu Arath, who was outraged at the recent revelation, and sought to take his corpse to be properly buried, only for the forces of the Lucent Brood to crash [[Wreckage|one]] of their warships near Oryx's corpse and try to resurrect him with Necromancy and Light of a [[Ghost]] and the Guardians successfully taking Oryx's remains to be locked up within one of the Tower's vaults.
Shin'ra would make one of his grander attempts to claim Ahsa's life by having his Celebrants unite to conduct a massive ritual to take her. Xivu Arath would learn about the Forge God's plan, and out of an act of anger for the death of Oryx, she would successfully move Ahsa to a separate ritual site first. Her [[Barotrauma|attempt]] to take the Proto-Worm would fail, with Shin'ra warning her that if she were to cross him again, he would send his entire army after her within her throne world.


====Silver Winged Temple====
====Silver Winged Temple====
Prior to Eris' ascension as the God of Vengeance, Shin'ra would take his time to make up for the failure to make the alliance with the Abhorrent Brood and the taking of Ahsa by c stealing power from the [[Tree of Silver Wings]] on [[Io]]. He would send his most elite servants of the Cult of Unmaking to lay siege to he region and to build what he would call the [[Forum:Temple of Exultation (location)|Temple of Exultation]] to siphon the Tree of its Light and Darkness. He would appoint Xurgen, a newly joined member of the Cult and the one responsible for killing most of the inhabitants of Io after it was Taken by the Witness, to see to the construction of the Temple.
In a bid to gain more power, and a means to test the strength of the Cult, Shin'ra would bring Io back into Sol in order to get the attention of the Guardians, knowing that their lust for weapons and armor would empower him. As Guardians would break through the defenses of the Temple and kill the Ionian Scourge, Shin'ra would send more members of the Cult, including its leader Storgor, to retake control over the Temple. When the Great Shatterer fell, Shin'ra would openly speak to the Lightbearers, taunting them of their efforts, claiming that their actions would only empower him and declaring that he would continue to send his forces to take back the Temple and claim its empowering Light and Darkness.


====Corruption of the Dreaming City====
====Corruption of the Dreaming City====
When the Guardians sought to make the fifteenth wish to [[Riven]] after the excommunication of Xivu Arath from her throne world, the Forge God would intervene by sending a massive force of the Weavers into the Dreaming City, spreading the influence of Corruption into its halls and the lair of the Ahamkara. His actions would also gain the attention of the Cabal's [[Forum:Golden Legion|Golden Legion]], who would build massive barricades surrounding the Dreaming City within the Reef, staging the events of the [[Forum:Golden War|Golden War]].
The Forge God would also take this opportunity to claim the remains of Xivu's forces, Taking the dead champions of the War God and claiming [[Forum:Kelgorath, Risen from Bones|Kelgorath]] as his own to lay siege to the Dreaming City. He would empower Kelgorath with Corruption, using him as the foundation of his plans.
After many weeks of fighting against the Weavers, Golden Legion Cabal and taking down the Cabal [[Forum:Aetas Imperium|flagship]], the Guardians of the Last City would begin preparations to end Shin'ra's plans and make the fifteenth wish to the last of the Ahamkara. The Forge God would task Kelgorath to head straight into the heart of the Dreaming City, the [[Keep of Voices]], and use the spire to finish the corruption of the Dreaming City. Breaching into the Keep of Voices, the Guardians would fight against the Corruption empowered Kelgorath and defeat him. Shin'ra would briefly appear before the Guardians, only to be fended off by [[Mara Sov]] and the projection of [[Riven]], casting the Forge God back into his throne world, ending his plans for corrupting the Dreaming City.


===Disciple's Ascension===
===Disciple's Ascension===
====Siege of the Last City====
====Siege of the Last City====
As Guardians would begin their final preparations to entire into the Pale Heart, the Witness would task Shin'ra to hold back their efforts in order to complete the Final Shape. From the safety of his throne world, Shin'ra would send his Hive, Taken and House of Salvation Fallen to invade the [[Last City]] by using the remaining ships of the Black Fleet that didn’t join the Witness. In the process of tbh is invasion, he would use newly created Taken units like Taken Marauders, Gladiators, Psion Flayers, Vanquishers, Harpies, Cyclopses and Tormentors into the Last City territories. He would also use his [[Forum:Aspect of Shin'ra|Aspects]] to destroy their defenses.
Despite his failure to destroy the Last City, his efforts were not in vein as the Witness was mere moments before completing the Final Shape. It would commune with Shin'ra and finally ascend him as one of its Disciples. The First Hive Disciple would then join the Witness in the Pale Heart as a means of defense, knowing that the Guardians would soon arrive.


====The Final Shape====
====Prepping the Final Shape====
Despite not appearing before the Guardians in the Pale Heart, he would puppeteer the events from the shadows. His own influence would begin to show his own forces being encountered in the Pale Heart and the appearance of the [[Forum:Templar (unit)|Templars]], Darkblade-like units of the [[The Dread|Dread]] who were once his Celebrants remade in the image of Shin'ra, and would be used in defense of the Witness's strongholds.


====Abandoning the Witness====
====Abandoning the Witness====
When the Witness was [[Iconoclasm|initially]] excised from three of its dissenting minds, Shin'ra finally took the chance to abandon the Witness and pull his remaining forces and Dread warriors from the Pale Heart. Shin'ra would consolidate his forces deep within the Nephilim, which around the same time, a Ghost by the name of Adrian would investigate the Nephilim and study further effects of the Darkness and its connection to Corruption. As the Guardians searched for the lost Ghost, they would have to go into Warpriest's Keep and hunt down the now resurrected Jirgâth. After finding the whereabouts of Adrian, the Ghost had unintentionally left behind some telemetry that he gathered while exploring the Nephilim. Shin'ra was gathering his forces en masse due to Xivu Arath's excommunication by accumulating and offering her remaining Wrathborn to the Hive Disciple and use that tribute to claim the Hive throne. They would also understand that Shin'ra's forces were trying to locate a device or structure known as the [[Forum:Hadium Forge|Hadium Forge]]. 
After the Witness's death, the forces of the Last City would rejoice, despite the fact that its death would leave a massive power vacuum in its wake. As its remaining forces would continue on with enacting the Final Shape to their own ends, Shin'ra sought the power that would come from the Witness's death, the [[Echo (object)|Echoes]], believing that one alone could be used to enact his own plans for a Final Shape.


====Hunt for the Echoes====
===Echo of Conquests===


==Personality and traits==
==Personality and traits==
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His overconfidence however has proven to be one of his weaknesses, as seen in [[Forum:Season of Sorrow|Season of Sorrow]], where he believed his power would inevitably lead to the corruption of the Guardians, only for his ambitions to fall short when they managed to channel the dark powers of Corruption for themselves. He would show his desperation for conquest when he tried to assist his Warpriest, Jirgâth, before his own demise. When he had failed, he funneled his resources to Zâtrox's scheme to resurrect the dead Court of Sorrow to reignite the conquest, proving to be yet another failure. He would show his frustrations when the Guardians would assault his forces when they slaughtered his Hive during his communion with the Abhorrent Brood, which caused him to lose not only the alliance, but a great deal of tribute.
His overconfidence however has proven to be one of his weaknesses, as seen in [[Forum:Season of Sorrow|Season of Sorrow]], where he believed his power would inevitably lead to the corruption of the Guardians, only for his ambitions to fall short when they managed to channel the dark powers of Corruption for themselves. He would show his desperation for conquest when he tried to assist his Warpriest, Jirgâth, before his own demise. When he had failed, he funneled his resources to Zâtrox's scheme to resurrect the dead Court of Sorrow to reignite the conquest, proving to be yet another failure. He would show his frustrations when the Guardians would assault his forces when they slaughtered his Hive during his communion with the Abhorrent Brood, which caused him to lose not only the alliance, but a great deal of tribute.


Unlike the other ideas of the Final Shape, Shin'ra believes in what is known as Perfection Eternal, a perfect universe where all exist in his own twisted vision of living forever. Despite his nature to conduct war and a Hive, he believes in the anatomical perfection of a separate stillness compared to the Witness's. Because of this, he knew that the Witness's Final Shape was a flawed piece, something that he took note of even before becoming a Hive and how it had manipulated the Krill to kill and devour each other through the Sword Logic and had become blind by the violence of the First Knife.
Unlike the other ideas of the Final Shape, Shin'ra believes in what is known as Perfection Eternal, a perfect universe where all exist in their own Golden Age. Despite his nature to conduct war, he believes in the anatomical perfection of a separate stillness compared to the Witness's.


==Gameplay==
==Gameplay==
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{{C|See [[Forum:Takedown in the Forged Pyramid|Takedown in the Forged Pyramid]] [[Forum:Takedown in the Forged Pyramid#Shin'ra, the Forge Master|Walkthrough: Shin'ra, the Forge Master]] for full gameplay}}
{{C|See [[Forum:Takedown in the Forged Pyramid|Takedown in the Forged Pyramid]] [[Forum:Takedown in the Forged Pyramid#Shin'ra, the Forge Master|Walkthrough: Shin'ra, the Forge Master]] for full gameplay}}


===Mission: Vanquish===
===Operation: Vanquish===


==Trivia==
==Trivia==
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