Editing Clovis Bray II

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'''Clovis Bray II''' was a [[Golden Age]] scientist. He was the son of [[Clovis Bray I]], who founded the [[Clovis Bray (corporation)|science corporation of the same name]]. He was the biological father of [[Willa Bray|Willa]], [[Elsie Bray|Elsie]], and [[Alton Bray|Alton]], and adopted [[Anastasia Bray|Anastasia]] into the family.

==Biography==
Like his father before him, Clovis II suffered from a neurodegenerative disorder known as the "Clovis Curse", which Clovis I had inadvertently inflicted on himself and all of his descendants through meddling with their genetic sequences. This disease progressed to a stage where Clovis II's only chance of survival was to be uploaded into an [[Exo]] body. Unfortunately, due to unresolved problems that inevitably led to the degeneration of early-generation exominds, Clovis II's mind deteriorated to a point where his strenuous, involuntary movements tore his own chassis apart.

==List of appearances==
*''[[Destiny]]:'' ''[[The Taken King]]'' {{Fm}}

==References==
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-'''Clovis Bray II''' was a [[Golden Age]] scientist. He was the son of [[Lusia Lin]] and [[Clovis Bray I]], who founded the [[Clovis Bray (corporation)|science corporation of the same name]]. He was the biological father of [[Willa Bray|Willa]], [[Elsie Bray|Elsie]], [[Alton Bray|Alton]], and [[Anastasia Bray|Anastasia]].
+'''Clovis Bray II''' was a [[Golden Age]] scientist. He was the son of [[Clovis Bray I]], who founded the [[Clovis Bray (corporation)|science corporation of the same name]]. He was the biological father of [[Willa Bray|Willa]], [[Elsie Bray|Elsie]], and [[Alton Bray|Alton]], and adopted [[Anastasia Bray|Anastasia]] into the family.
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-Clovis I genetically altered his son out of a desire to make Clovis II a "flawless image" of himself. While Clovis II was developing, Clovis I replaced his mitochondrial DNA (normally inherited from the mother) with his own in order to ensure he was ''"in Clovis II's cellular engines, powering his existence.''"
+Like his father before him, Clovis II suffered from a neurodegenerative disorder known as the "Clovis Curse", which Clovis I had inadvertently inflicted on himself and all of his descendants through meddling with their genetic sequences. This disease progressed to a stage where Clovis II's only chance of survival was to be uploaded into an [[Exo]] body. Unfortunately, due to unresolved problems that inevitably led to the degeneration of early-generation exominds, Clovis II's mind deteriorated to a point where his strenuous, involuntary movements tore his own chassis apart.
-Clovis I continued to meddle with Clovis II's genes throughout his life. One such modification, intended to allow Clovis II to no longer require sleep, led Clovis II to instead develop a neurodegenerative disorder known as the "Clovis Curse", a "fatal prion insomnia" which could be passed on to his children. Having previously been granted an ultra-vigilant immune system by Clovis I's tampering, Clovis II's body would reject all attempts at treatment, and as the disease progressed, Clovis I decided that Clovis II's only chance of survival was to be uploaded into an [[Exo]] body. Unfortunately, due to unresolved problems that inevitably led to the degeneration of early-generation exominds, Clovis II's mind deteriorated to a point where his strenuous, involuntary movements tore his own chassis apart.
-The [[Mysterious Logbook]] makes further mention of the "Clovis Curse". It is suggested there (but later questioned whether this was simply a manipulation on Clovis' part to drive her into the Exo program) that Clovis II did indeed pass his affliction onto at least one of his children, [[Elisabeth Bray]].<ref>[[Mysterious_Logbook#MESSAGE_TO_BRAY.2C_ELISABETH_2|Mysterious Logbook - MESSAGE TO BRAY, ELISABETH 2]]</ref>
 ==List of appearances==
-*''[[Destiny]]: [[The Taken King]]'' {{Fm}}
+*''[[Destiny]]:'' ''[[The Taken King]]'' {{Fm}}
-*''[[Destiny 2]]: [[Beyond Light]]'' {{Mo}}
-*''[[Mysterious Logbook]]'' {{Mo}}
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